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Our Iron Man Poems

16 Jun 2017


  Our Iron Man Poems


Buzz!
He is so tall.
Beep!
Everything around him is so small.

Clunk!
He could touch everything with his hand.
Thud! 
He could live on land.

Thunder!
He could have no fear.
Whaha!
He could shed a tear.

Growl!
He feels very sad.
Humph!
His face looks very mad.

Ping!
His eyes are squinty green.
Smack!
He looks very mean.

Whoosh! 
His eyes go ping.
Oh!
And he doesn't have string.

Sniff!
He cries and cries.
Aaahh!
The Iron Man gives a big sigh.

 

Written by Michael 

Well done Michael. You got a Special Mention for your amazing poem.

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Bang!
The Iron Man was so strong.
Crash!
He had two arms that were very long.

Buzz!
The Iron Man's were very green.
Beep!
They like a crown belonging to a queen.

Thunder!
The Iron Man was full of fear.
Sizzle!
The noise was too loud for him to hear.

Thump!
The Iron Man was as tall as a house.
Pop!
He was scared like a mouse.

Written by Ellie

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Beep!
The Iron Man was very strong.
Buzz!
His legs were very long.

Bang!
The Iron Man was standing by the hill.
Bleep!
He looked down and saw the mill.

Honk!
The Iron Man was very tall.
Crash!
It was a long way down to fall.

Bong!
The Iron Man looked sad.
Pop!
Everyone around him thought he was bad.

By Sephy


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Honk!
The Iron Man's arm are very strong.
Bop!
His head is small and his legs are long.

Bang!
The Iron Man is standing on the hill.
Crackle!
He was standing by the mill.

Grumble!
The Iron Man was very sad.
Growl!
Because his pet was mad.

Sizzle!
The Iron Man shook his hand.
Buzz!
Because he is in the band.

Written by Zinedine

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You all worked hard on your poems. Your performances of your poems, with sounds effects for the onomatopoeia, were brilliant. Very entertaining!
Mrs Wendy Pastorelli - 16 Jun 2017 - 20:33
Last edited on 16 Jun 2017 - 20:35
 
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